Other My "short" Story

[Matilda]

Last year I wrote this stupid story for class that ended up being the thing that triggered warning lights in my teacher. I hate it now because of all the stuff I had to go through because of it, but before taht happened it was precious to me since it was like my way of sharing my story.
Anyways, I decided to put it up and share it in this link. I don't have a specific reason why and I'm hoonestly not looking for any form of popularity in it. Just if anyone wants to skim thorugh it since it's stupidly long, than feel free to here
http://www.teenink.com/novels/other/book/124715/Bilita-Mpash-Adabellas-Story/

 

[KwanYingirl]

@Matilda I grew up in Marshfield, MA. Your poem is very clever. I enjoyed reading every other line. Is that something you did or just noticed it afterwards?

 

[Matilda]

Wow that's totally not mine haha. Umm...I'm gonna have to check that link out

 

[ihateusernames]

Don't hate it, @Matilda it's still your story and it's a sad and beautiful one at that. I don't know what happened after you wrote it, but it seems like it would be a shame to let it go entirely. It's a good thing you're sharing it now.

 

[Matilda]

I'm really really frustrated that I can't share it :/ I can't find any way to put the link here because it keeps linking to a poem I didn't write. I'm really frustrated right now

 

[joeylittle]

@Matilda, for what it's worth, when I clicked the link on my proper computer the story came up; but on my phone (basically, the teenink mobile site) I get the poem.

 

[ihateusernames]

The link works fine. If your story is 14 pages long I was able to read it fine.