A Song In The Works

[healingangel90]

Hiding under covers
Cant make one move
Wont live life like this
All because of you

I will take a stand
Forget about the consequences
Let my heart
Talk me through

The innocence you have taken
All the tears you’ve made
Promises left broken
And memories that wont fade

But I will try to move on
But I cant fly til your gone

Stop stealing identities
Stop giving your pain to me
'cuz it hurts

Don’t cry for sympathy
'cuz you wont get any
No, not from me

The innocence you have taken
All the tears you’ve made
Promises left broken
And memories that wont fade

This is just a song I wrote a few days ago. Still working on finishing it. Any feedback or input would be great :) (This is the first time I've been able to write about anything dealing with my abuse.)

 

[Nyx]

It is really sad, but at the same time it's really good that you put it into words and let it out.:thumbsup: I like that you expressed so much with very simple words. Good job!

 

[healingangel90]

Thank you! By the way, I love the status under your name :)

 

[Nyx]

Thanks. It's the "Title", a feature any member can add for 10$. You can read [DLMURL="http://sexabuse.ptsdforum.org/pages/important_additions/"]here[/DLMURL] if you're interested :)

How's it going with the song? What instrument will accompany it? Do you write the music for that also?

 

[healingangel90]

I'll definitely look into it! And I haven't really worked on the song since posting it, but I'm teaching myself guitar now. Usually I just make the music using a computer program but I'd love to be able to sing it with the guitar :) Thanks for asking!

 

[Marie E.]

I love your song Healingangel!!

 

[healingangel90]

Thanks a lot Marie! :)
I wish I could show everyone how it sounded.

 

[Nyx]

You could record it and upload it on Youtube, and then embed it here. I would really love to hear it :)

It's nice that you're learning guitar, it's a lovely instrument!

 

[healingangel90]

Thanks for the suggestion Nyx! Here it is. Still working on finishing the lyrics and maybe adding some music to it. I know I'm not a very good singer, and I usually don't ever let anybody hear me sing so I hope it's not at all painful to listen to lol!

 

[Marie E.]

Are you f*cking kidding me? You have a damn fine voice and I don't have a reason to lie!!!!!!!!!!
Compared to you, I'd keep my day time job, if I had one lol!

 

[Nyx]

Wow, you do have a really beautiful voice and it sings the story beautifully. I admire your courage and thank you for sharing. I enjoyed it very much and I would very much like to hear anything else you have to offer:angel:

 

[healingangel90]

Thank you so much Nyx and Marie! I'm glad I was able to share it with you guys. I'm already working on a new song, even though this one isn't done :P