Death This Is My Breath !

[Canticle]

When I went the Ronin way
sheading my skin,
you asked me why, why why?
Hell all the diamonds and gold
won't say it true!
Time stands still...
hearts beating black;
Stumbling down like fools,
Bending down on my sunshine.
So I hang my breath,
I embrace my death!
Hell yeah;
now you have my
Buckskin under foot,
now you have my
Cry!

 

[Phantom Shadow]

An I thought that I was the only one that wrote poems that are to what I am feeling an dealing with at the time. I just have not been brave enough to put it for anyone to see. Most of it is only in my weird head. Great job. I don't understand yours sorry but then sometimes I think we are not suppose too.

 

[Canticle]

An I thought that I was the only one that wrote poems that are to what I am feeling an dealing w...

It is about loosing faith in humanity. Not being able to trust in athority and their ability to love true. I have endured a harsh life; yet, I have never let go of my true love and greater light within. It is the Way of the Ronin spirit. To endure hell fire itsellf to be united with the loyalty and faith of honor. Love is the greatest blessing for the true Ronin. I would love to read your poetry. I have found it to be quite positive therapy for my broken soul. Thank you for respounding.

 

[Phantom Shadow]

I see that yours has more thought to them than mine. Mine are just my mind rambling an attempting to make prose usually with a theme of death or whatever I am worrying over at the time.

 

[Canticle]

Let your words breathe and trust in the wisdom of your soul. I haved endured complex PTSD DID since I was 2 years old. It was a very lonely life for me. Always beeing out of faze and trying to hold onto me at the same time. I found that writing and just letting my emotions flow helped me to reconnect with the parts if me that were altered beyound the spectrum and scattered within. There are no words that should be silenced regarding that path to heal and reconnect. Let it breathe and when you are ready to share in the process; I am sure that there will be those that will greatly benifit from the imprint and structure of your progress. Best wishies phantom shadow.