Eleven Words - One Poem: Elfchen

[Deleted member 29920]

Syrup
No please
Rotses Smeagols teethses
Much rather juicy raw
Feeshes

 

[Justmehere]

"Feeshes,"
He said,
"so many feeshes
In the sea"
We brokeup

 

[trying2movefwd]

Brokeup
I thought
long and hard
and then I decided
to

 

[Justmehere]

To dance
And learn to sing
Forgetting
He said I
Was

 

[trying2movefwd]

Was
was not
able to carry
a tune or dance
DISCO!

 

[digger]

DISCO!
NO! NO!
Turn it off!
I would rather hear
Silence

 

[Deleted member 29920]

Silence
She said
My ears hurt
And so does my
Head

 

[sedna]

Silence
She said
My ears hurt
And so does my
Head

The pop up advertisement on my phone is in your post.
Its a green toe, a toungue sticking out, and asks if you have gas or bloating, mouth ulcers or itchy rashes- sad looking cartoon guy with green hair and an inflamed liver.

So far disco illness has lost its seriousnes next to this possibly alcoholic farting cartoon with herpes and rashes.

Does everyone have the pop ups on the phone? Ive noticed theyre oddly placed sometimes.
Okay sorry- my elfchen is next

 

[sedna]

Head
Over heels
Whever I see
His luminous eyes noticing
Me

 

[trying2movefwd]

Me
oh my
I met a guy
All he did was lie
goodbye

 

[Deleted member 29920]

Goodbye
Reginald Dwight
Yellow brick Road
Annoying camp wailing muppet
Toad

 

[Deleted member 29920]

Does everyone have the pop ups on the phone? I

No... but my phone likes to direct me to odd restaurant sites, The Gate, anyone? :cautious::devilish: