Eleven Words - One Poem: Elfchen

[Deleted member 42957]

Better
Is what?
Am I better?
Better than I was?
Questions

 

[Ronin]

Questions
Some them
Are better answerable
By silence and passing
Time

 

[Deleted member 33052]

Seppuku

I thought it was a good poem. You're welcome to disagree, but I don't think it was inappropriate. Was that just your opinion or did I break a rule?

 

[Ronin]

@Mal Content, neither nor! :D

I was just following by another poem.
& Reminding myself. Some words are loaded.
So it wasn't as much aimed at anything, as continuing :)

 

[Deleted member 33052]

Time
Photons race
Through the void
Of space in Planck
Time

 

[Ronin]

Time
Not enough
Too much of
Unreliable measure of life's
Moments

 

[Deleted member 42957]

Moments
Time treasures
Capsules of happiness
Or bombs of trauma
Stay

 

[Ronin]

Stay
A word
That changes into
Looks, whispers, when they
Leave

 

[Deleted member 42957]

Leave
Please don't
Turn away again
I'm scared and lonely
Help

 

[notJuliana]

Help
is hard
to find sometimes
And often hard to
Take

 

[Deleted member 33052]

Take
What I
Offer without condition.
Give willingly or give
Nothing.

 

[Crow]

Nothing
Comes from
Nothing. Nothing ever
Could. I must've done
Something