Eleven Words - One Poem: Elfchen

[Deleted member 28403]

Mine
She said
People aren't property
She never really understood
That

 

[Ronin]

That
Has solutions
Like letting people
Know they wrong, going
Away

 

[Deleted member 28403]

Away
From pain
I would exist
If it was all
Perfect

 

[digger]

Perfect
Is overrated
In my opinion
Leaves you nowhere to
Go

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Perfect
Illusion captured
Held dear inviolate
Until the bubble bursts
Untrustworthy

 

[Deleted member 28740]

*(Go
Is view
The same still?
Pulled away a moment
Changed!)

*Not sure how to handle the break in flow when it changes during writing/posting. Go back for continuity, or 'just like life'? ; )

 

[Deleted member 28403]

If you want you can edit, but it's okay to go with the new flow :P

 

[digger]

Changed
and Untrustworthy
I am suspicious
Of things out of
Place:cautious: ;)

 

[Ronin]

Place
I find
A new one
Makes for an interesting
Puzzle

;)

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Puzzle
Distracting engaging
Solution within reach
Or is it? Confounding
Mind

 

[digger]

Mind
The gap
Head and heart
Thoughts and feelings lost
Connection

 

[Deleted member 29920]

Connection
Next stop
Yet another station
On a black starlight
Night