Eleven Words - One Poem: Elfchen

[Ronin]

Balance
Something you
Still balance on
The sharp edges of
Bravo ;)

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Bravo
Messed up and did an edit
No self
Trust
or

 

[Ronin]

Or
It is being quite creative person
Who types
Thinks
Fast

 

[digger]

Fast
Hands flapping:eek:
No. No. No.:arghh;
One. Two. Three. Four.
One.

;):D

 

[Deleted member 28740]

One tree
Assailed by storm
Core trunk
Mind digging deeper
Roots

 

[Ronin]

Roots are
Always good reminder
Dear people
Smiling despite any
Circumstances

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Circumstances
Choices too
Control of which
Contorted by
Climbing out
UnRaveled

 

[Ronin]

I love your elfchen so much, Changeling. :tup:

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Cashew, thank you. This is new to me. Enjoy this very much.

 

[digger]

Sorry to get all hand flappy about it, but...

an "Elfchen" is a poem of exactly eleven words (so: a "Little Eleven" :) ). The first line consists of one word only, the second line of two words only, the third line of three words only, the fourth line of four words only and the fifth line of one word only.

Love the new contributions but could we keep to the elfchen format please? I guess that not everyone has read the original post that explains it (understandable as it's quite far back now!)

 

[digger]

Unravelled
The thread
It came undone
I pulled too hard
Whoops!

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Whoops
Rules unknown
Now informed well
A challenge mind likes
Expressively