joeylittle
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@Simply Simon, I've got a few that really are tiny, but would possibly do well to strengthen the whole. Take what's useful.
Like I said, a whole bunch of tiny, take or leave. :coffee:
I think it'd be better either with 'thousands' alone, or 'thousands - in fact, millions - '. The hundreds is misleadingly small (though good rhetoric).of hundreds if not thousands
Maybe founding, administering, and developing the ever-expanding vision for the world's greatest, etc.? That's not right either - but otherwise maintaining sounds a bit static, and Anthony really is constantly attuned to growth and development for the site.founding, administrating, and otherwise maintaining the world's greatest PTSD forum
Here's one where I think 'clearly demonstrated' would be....clearer. :pAnthony has demonstrated global reach,
maybe 'inspired and inspiring idea'? The seemingly far-fetched reads a little nutty professor, as opposed to driving force (to me)inspiring--albeit seemingly far-fetched--idea
Is 'almost' correct? If it's honest to say 'relies entirely on member donations and his own personal investment' it's stronger and eliminates a question that doesn't need asking. Also makes it all much more entrepeneurial. I hate that word and can never spell it.almost entirely on member donations and his own personal investment
Might need to provide emphasis for 'yearly', since we are offsetting it against 'monthly' - you know style rules way better than me - right now, the point isn't landing hard in the sentence.a week to cover our yearly server cost.
Not sure you need 'essentially', qualifier weakens it.of--essentially--disabled
I wanted one of these to be stronger, referencing the struggles for adequate mental health care, maybe, or...something. health care was what came to mind, every person from every country struggles with that.to get out of bed or check their mail every day.
Reads a little too much like it was a kindness, as opposed to a seriously motivated intention to get the site onto stable financial ground so that Anthony could put his energy where it would be far better spent - continuing to grow the vision for the site. Anyway, that's what it felt like at the time.lessen the burden and stress on our fellow sufferer, Anthony Parsons, and his wife.
i wanted the 'perhaps' to go away, I think it's too soft - and I'm not sure about 'growing stigma', it's more like omnipresent stigma - except not that word. But PTSD has been stigmatized, historically, since before it had a name.Perhaps if Anthony could share his idea through TED, the growing stigma toward suffers of PTSD, to veterans and survivors of rape and other violence, might diminish, even a little, even if only for eighteen glorious minutes.
Maybe ex-serviceman? I like the idea of referencing Nicolette's point, here:Anthony Parsons is a veteran
It's good bio background.Anthony was only 33 when he was first sent on leave being unable to work and diagnosed around 34-35 years of age.
This made me spit take my coffee into the computer. it was the juxtaposition of 'expository' and 'ass'. :D@Eleanor way to kick major expository ass.
Like I said, a whole bunch of tiny, take or leave. :coffee: