Eleven Words - One Poem: Elfchen

[Deleted member 28403]

System
To escape
That is all
Interaction I want with
It

 

[Deleted member 28403]

@digger

Congrats on getting the 1000th reply on the thread :)

 

[seedling]

It
Always there
Changing various forms
Forming the same colors
Sighing

 

[Deleted member 20978]

Sighing
Without regret
Names people call
Are quite hurtful isn't
It

 

[Deleted member 28403]

It
A mistery
The pronoun game
Without ever knowing true
Identity

 

[Deleted member 28403]

Identity
Half Price
Everybody is unique
Mark yourself with another
Product

 

[Deleted member 20978]

Productive
Is relative
Ripples through time
Carry us ceaselessly into
Past

 

[Deleted member 28403]

Past
Simply hurts
Paving a way
To each painful memory
Again

 

[Deleted member 28403]

Again
And again
And again, again
Will you stop hurting
Me?

 

[Deleted member 20978]

Me
Me me
I hope I
Am not the source
Pain

 

[Kintsugi]

Pain
Is weakness
Leaving--oh shut
The f*ck up, won't
You?

 

[Deleted member 28740]

You?
OK/ @Jemini. Took that personal. Why did you take that open expression of poem as bad faith? Just a connection to your last word. The purpose of this thread.

Please go easy Jemini. Lots of turbulence in the last week or so.