Eleven Words - One Poem: Elfchen

[Ronin]

Day
Starting times
Like inner clock
Is something of wonder
Blessing

 

[Deleted member 37085]

Blessing
to know
how to appropriately
write a successful Elfchen
poem!

YEAH thanks @Ronin and @digger! Woohoo! Darned a.d.d. & dyslexia!

 

[Ronin]

The last word, @JadesJewel :)

It needs one more word and you're right on the mark.

 

[digger]

Poem
Only needs
One more word
To be a perfect
Elfchen! ;)

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Mark
goal set
seek beyond shackles
release with out harm
sailing

 

[Deleted member 37085]

Sailing
through my
mind is like
walking through land mines
blind!

 

[shatter eyes]

Blind
He is
Yet he sees
More than my eyes
Closed

 

[digger]

Closed
Many doors
Burned many bridges
Can't find my way
Back

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Back
Cover mine
Turn around slowly
Or fast and run
No-one

 

[shatter eyes]

No-one
Behind mirror
Smash shatter scatter
Whose there? Was me
Shattered

 

[Deleted member 37085]

Shattered
you left
me...now building
back. I define my
time...

 

[Crow]

Time
Time Time
I'm running out
of ways of running
away