Eleven Words - One Poem: Elfchen

[Kintsugi]

Though
The crows
Have their languages
The people still raise
Rifles

 

[Deleted member 28403]

Rifles
Just one
A single one
Will rid me of
Suffering

 

[Kintsugi]

Suffering
In its
Latin roots means
To bear up from
Under

 

[digger]

Under
Burning bridges
Water still flows
Coloured red by flames
Reflected

 

[Deleted member 28403]

Reflected
The eyes
In the mirror
Looking back, pain of
Betrayal

 

[Deleted member 28403]

Reflection
Of saddness
My mind sometimes
Truly seems to be
Nothing

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Reflected
Upon or
Or on, distortions
Mirror and Mind to
Resolve

 

[Deleted member 28403]

For some reason when viewing the thread, it often doesn't skip to last post, but a few before the last...
Anyone else having the same problem

 

[digger]

Resolve
To solve
And find answers
To all those unanswered
Questions

 

[digger]

@Saelben

it often doesn't skip to last post, but a few before the last...

It happens sometimes when people are posting in quick succession. Your notification takes you to the last post you missed, not the last post in the thread. Worth checking before replying if there have been more messages posted in the meantime.

 

[Deleted member 28740]

Questions
Answered sometimes
In a maze
Wandering seeking without obstruction
Vista

 

[Deleted member 28403]

Vista
Such mistakes
Has MS made
With that darn operating
System